10-09-2019, 07:19 PM
There is so much of this application I like... That being said, while Dragons normally would be Muiri, an exception does in fact exist that I believe works for the characters history since you are going with a viking/Scandinavian past.
I am also a bit curious as to how he came about this shapechange... You mentioned a God, but never name one directly. For the sake of fleshing the character out a bit I also thought I would throw this link out there... http://www.sanctuaryshard.com/index.php?title=Pantheon
***Honestly the more I think about this the more I think that the issue is both the Vampire/Dragon component to this character. I'm not sure they can reconcile to form one since the way we wrote the fiction was essentially to make werewolve/vampires/witches and the like, Humans. And as Nir mentioned, the application does have a small slant towards summon/construct...
You mentioned you were open to suggestions so I have a thrown a few your way. Read this over and tell me if it helps. I can tell from the application you know how to write and I'm really interested in seeing Valtyr come to life.
Quote:Elven-style races who born Aelfeyn and then become dragons in later years are considered Aelfeyn and not "true" dragons like those of the Muiri or Hoggur dragons.http://www.sanctuaryshard.com/index.php?title=Aelfeyn
I am also a bit curious as to how he came about this shapechange... You mentioned a God, but never name one directly. For the sake of fleshing the character out a bit I also thought I would throw this link out there... http://www.sanctuaryshard.com/index.php?title=Pantheon
***Honestly the more I think about this the more I think that the issue is both the Vampire/Dragon component to this character. I'm not sure they can reconcile to form one since the way we wrote the fiction was essentially to make werewolve/vampires/witches and the like, Humans. And as Nir mentioned, the application does have a small slant towards summon/construct...
Quote:Not Humans If you wish to play a character that has been possessed by a demon or has a shape change brought about by a magical curse, then the race category is technically one of the Summons & Constructs because it will be salt that is your weakness, rather then silver.http://www.sanctuaryshard.com/index.php?title=Humans
You mentioned you were open to suggestions so I have a thrown a few your way. Read this over and tell me if it helps. I can tell from the application you know how to write and I'm really interested in seeing Valtyr come to life.
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