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Nikolai Ranier - Davros - 08-19-2019
(partner character, Nadua, will be submitted by Soumia later)
Discord Id - xDavros S#9767
Previous Characters- Davros Steiner
Character Name - Nikolai Ranier
Character Race & Sub-Race- Summon / Daimon
Alternate Graphic- None needed
Character Description - Nikolai stands at roughly 6 feet and 5 inches tall. His body type is athletic and his skin is the color of charcoal. (standard drow hue works too). His hair is crimson, matching that of his eyes.
Shard Plot Line - No access to world map needed
Special Role-play Ability- "Direct Control"- Nikolai is able to temporarily take control of Nadua and sate her bloodlust, however, the state of her hunger may hinder how long it will hold (This is with her OOC consent). Nadua may encounter bouts of madness that may cause her to lash out at any random bystander, friend or foe. This ONLY works on her, and during those moments shes gone wild Nikolai will be able to calm her down easier and keep her from physically lashing out
Previous World- The depths of the world "Silverfalls", within a fiery underground cavern
Backstory - "Help me". That is all he heard. Those two words echoing in the black void that pulled and tugged at his consciousness. When Nikolai woke, he was far from home, and yet a place not unfamiliar to the one he left behind. Gothic arches and curtains of reds and violets. He liked it, the ambiance of it all, until his senses alerted him to something scurrying about the floor nearby.He turned to find an utterly destroyed room. Splintered wood and shattered stone, accompanied by a whimpering within the darkened corner... All the signs were there. The summoning circle. The candles. the books and crystals. yet the pull from whomever called him was that of a woman in the corner... or atleast, it seemed to be a woman. As Nikolai approached a clawed, white, blood covered hand reached out from the void, followed by another, until the shape of a female with fiery red hair begin crawling on all fours slowly over to him.
"Why have you-". That was all he could say before the woman was on top of him. Her eyes alight with hate, her maw open unnaturally wide, with teeth like that of a shark. Her screech like a banshee, nearly defening him as he fights to keep her from ripping him apart. The power behind her small form quickly knocks him off his feet, and her claws quickly work at tearing into his flesh as he attempts to ward her away.
"ENOUGH!" He roars, though it seemed foolish. The state of her rage surely could not be halted with intimidating words... and yet... It did. The woman stops, her fanged mouth returning to normal as her muscles relax, slipping off of him as she curls into a fetal position and quickly falls asleep. She listened, but for how long? No matter, he thought. She summoned him to help her, whether from her current condition or one hidden behind it, he would do so. Surely those living nearby may know of her, or know how to help.
RE: Nikolai Ranier - NirAntae - 08-19-2019
Could you elaborate a bit on the special roleplay ability, please? I'm not sure exactly what it encompasses. (Does it only work on her? Sate her bloodlust how? etc.)
RE: Nikolai Ranier - Davros - 08-19-2019
done
RE: Nikolai Ranier - Morde - 08-19-2019
Thumbs up!
RE: Nikolai Ranier - Katya - 08-19-2019
Thumbs up!
RE: Nikolai Ranier - NirAntae - 08-19-2019
While this app/story sounds fine for the most part, I am hesitant to give it a thumbs up until the companion app is put up; 'wandering around Kraestret' isn't really enough motivation in terms of the shard plotline - but that is a (potential) issue with her app more than his, so actually seeing that on her app is important since they are linked.
RE: Nikolai Ranier - Davros - 08-19-2019
After giving it thought i made a compromise. I will keep Nikolai (Nadua as well) to summer isle away from the world map until they have a better RP footing in the game, and a better hold on her condition. at that time we will adjust the app for world map access and see what their story evolves around to them doing in the main plot.
RE: Nikolai Ranier - NirAntae - 08-19-2019
With that, it has my thumbs up for Summer Isle access only.
RE: Nikolai Ranier - Lara - 08-20-2019
approved